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Breaking the Walls of Reason by ~Fithakk:iconFithakk:



Falling away from the light the darkness is growing into a
Way out no way out no way to
Escape no escape no way to leave
The blood it’s on my hands on the walls I’m drowning in
His eyes the pits the wells of wisdom
Burning flesh stinking smoking to the
Walls of existence closing turning finding a
Path in the night turn to light live in
Faith trust in God hallowed be thy name thy kingdom
Run I cannot run…
©2007-2009 ~Fithakk
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Author's Comments

This is an excerpt from my short story 'Burning Earth'.

The story is a gothic piece, and this section details the thoughts of a man stumbling through panic and fear, driven by his failing faith.

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it works so well as a poem by itself, i love it
really gives the sense of urgency and fear
yup, the ending is the best bit..
dammit too good
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I must agree with Catherine, the ending is fantastic and finishes the piece nicely. you're pretty good at writing I must say.

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turn around - I want you.
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Arigato! : D

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September 18, 2007
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